Thursday, 1 December 2011
Free Choice #7
The book im reading is called "Cinderella Cleaners" by Maya Gold. In it my question is What will Diana's parents reaction be when they see that she is not at home and she has got a babysitter to watch the 2 sisters. I think that Fay her step mom will be very mad and upset, and i dont think her dad will care as much as Fay will. I think he might be a bit upset because he knew Diana really wanted to go to opening night, but what he doesnt know is that she didnt go to opening night at her school she went to an opening concert so that is what i will think he will be most upset about and how she lied to him.
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ReplyDeleteYour content is fine Samantha, brief, but ok for this format.
ReplyDeleteYou do however, need to more carefully edit your writing to ensure that you are correctly using the language conventions required in an academic stream.
Use 'I' not 'i'. Watch that you include an apostrophe when creating contractions(im reading = I'm reading; i dont = I don't; he doesnt know = he doesn't know. . .etc). Use italics to punctuate your novel titles. Use a : to introduce your question (In it my question is: What. . . ). Make sure that you are watching for the sentence errors we learned in class (run on sentences like: I think he might be a bit upset because he knew Diana really wanted to go to opening night, but what he doesnt know is that she didnt go to opening night at her school she went to an opening concert so that is what i will think he will be most upset about and how she lied to him.)